Fate

Once or hundred times if you fail,

               try again,

and ultimately you will prevail,

               and in between you will have to face,

people's threats and menace.

They may also criticise your frustrated mind,

               but do not give up - you still have time.

Anyway, their words are not true,

               so you have no reason to cry and hue,

you will have to presume - 

               that it is your fate,

so whatever it brings you,

               you cannot hate.

Yet, you know, that you had strived,

               so whatever you achieve, you have to be satisfied.

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Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Very positive....I liked every line...beautifully written.

[Ayesha Binte Islam]

Thank you so much for your review.

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.....

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Loved the rhyming scheme!
Indeed, being satisfied and never giving up can lead on to success!
Thank you for sharing :)

[Ayesha Binte Islam]

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem. Please read more of my writings and review them too.

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Yeah! The Lord has a plan for our lives.

#relate

[Ayesha Binte Islam]

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem. Please read more of my writings and review them too.