DOG

DOG

A Poem by ayosonolowo
"

This poem was writting by me to my one and only dog

"
Friendly and helpfull
arrogant to the unknown
like a soldier on the battle
field
how i wish i could understand
his language

© 2013 ayosonolowo


Author's Note

ayosonolowo
Please correct me my mistakes

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Thanks alot
your review really helps

Posted 10 Years Ago


Just change "can" to "could" or "was able to"

This is a nice ode to a faithful companion. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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ayosonolowo
ayosonolowo

Kano, Christainity, Nigeria



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My names are David Ayo Olowoeyo, a local Nigerian young writer born in Kano but originated From kogi state, and writings has been a path of me since when i was at 0 level, though i stay local and have.. more..

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