Need you

How will it feel if i lose you?
I had a solid heart of gold,
but you break it into pieces,

how will it feel if i lose you?
Tears getting my shirt socking wet,

day and night sitting by your bed side,
looking at you, maybe you will,
get well,

how will it feel if i lose you?
Why do you have to get sick,
living my world so cold,

you've already break my heart,
if you live me,
i might die,

feeling of bitterness,
bittering my heart,
thinking of you,

can't go home, to have a better sleep,
can't go home to have a better food,
thinking of you,

please get well soon

Author's Note

Thanks for reading

Reviews

[ayosonolowo]

Thanks alot i really appreciate your review

[The dark story]

a very touching sweet poem poem...depicting the true emotions in the verses giving an honest tribute to your loved one. lovely write thanks for sharing.

[ayosonolowo]

Thanks alot i really appreciate

[AmandaN]

Lovely,a very moving tribute to your sick loved one. I hope they are better :-)

[ayosonolowo]

Thanks alot, yes she's better now,

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

When we're in loved, we used to think of the person every second of the day. These are all true in the name of love.

Nice poem.

[ayosonolowo]

Thanks alot

[TL Boehm]

this is a poignant piece. It is so hard watching someone who may leave and there is nothing we can do. Nicely penned

[ayosonolowo]

You're welcome

[Sami Khalil]

you've already break my heart,
if you live me,
i might die,

feeling of bitterness,
bittering my heart,
thinking of you,

can't go home, to have a better sleep,
can't go home to have a better food,
thinking of you,

please get well soon

A very sad poem full of faith and healing requests along the continuous thinking of her...Splendid...:)

[ayosonolowo]

Thanks alot sir

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)