Friend

Friend

A Poem by ayosonolowo
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This was writting when i depart from a very real friend.

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Thinking of the times we spent, together,

makes me feel bad seperating from other,

a friend that care,
a friend so dare,

you've been my sleet of joy,
though i take you for a toy,

how would i unravel,
the feelings full of ravel,

you've been my sleeve,
and a night time slave,

i look so wan,
fallen to wane,

i have no other way,
than to let you flow away,

oh dare friend i will always think of you,
even though you left me in a throe,

© 2013 ayosonolowo


Author's Note

ayosonolowo
Thank alot

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THis has such a strange, melencholoy charm...I like it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


ayosonolowo

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much, for liking my poem
Losing a friend is a sad story...but one should move on. A true friend will never leave you...remember that.

Posted 7 Years Ago


ayosonolowo

7 Years Ago

Thanks alot, i really appreciate the review
Loved the rhyming. Good one ayo

Posted 7 Years Ago


ayosonolowo

7 Years Ago

Thanks alot ma
It is very sad to lose a friend and I think you did well to write this.
There were a few spelling errors here and there but keep writing, and I'm sure it will become easier and easier.

I enjoyed it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


ayosonolowo

7 Years Ago

Thank alot lola
your rhyming is simple yet love the idea that it made sense. Friendship is an amazing experience
nicely written :)


Posted 7 Years Ago


ayosonolowo

7 Years Ago

I really appreciate your dropping by to grace my writting, thanks alot.
Annie S

7 Years Ago

you're welcome :)
Beautifully written, my dear friend.

Posted 7 Years Ago


ayosonolowo

7 Years Ago

You're welcome
Akashi

7 Years Ago

:D :D :D :D Thank you :D :D
It is disheartning when two good friends seperate for any reason for that causes some hurt and pain between the two whether they acknowledge it or not....A splendid poem...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


ayosonolowo

7 Years Ago

Thank you alot
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)

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Added on August 18, 2013
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ayosonolowo
ayosonolowo

Kano, Christainity, Nigeria



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My names are David Ayo Olowoeyo, a local Nigerian young writer born in Kano but originated From kogi state, and writings has been a path of me since when i was at 0 level, though i stay local and have.. more..

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