Dying

Super short but deep

It might seem like

That I just died

But for so long

I've been dead inside

Reviews

[lovelife]

wow good write, it's like you have this mask people see you as a happy person but really inside you are falling a part

[realmwriter]

I think a lot of go on with our lives like slaves and zombies. We don't realize how dead we really are. But I find that I must agree with Momzilla in that I hope this isn't a sentiment of your state of mind.

[Kaelee Wyant]

It's a long story (^,.,^)

[realmwriter]

I am sure that is. Perhaps, when you are ready. You will write about it and in so doing, you will begin to heal.

[MomzillaNC]

Bereft lines… reminiscent a suicide note, scrawled across the mirror by great aunt when she took her life. I hope these aren't sentiments on your own state of mind. If they are, I hope you have someone who loves you to turn to and that you will turn to them.

[Chris]

about you or some peeps you know? or just a comment on anything? I'm not dinging on ya - am really curious.

[Kaelee Wyant]

About me mostly I dunno

[Chris]

reacheed a point where "caring" is just plain hard to come by?