New Diagnosed Validity

Liberate

To behave in a convincing way

Proving a point

That I’m here to stay

Making changes

Needed to be made today

New memories now created

To deaden the pain

Of running into people daily

Who have no concern for

Transcending their way of life

To a new level

A chore that’s vanquished

So a lot of people revel in the mediocrity

Mentality game

I have no symptoms of this validity disease

It’s a shame

The masses refrain

From possible exponential life changing gains

Their plagued by lack of initiative

To ignite the dormant flame

Within their own personal fire pits

The potential energy from their burning desires

Could fuel their vision

To believe in

What could be tangible for their own keepsakes

Remains absurd

So instead the masses continue following the herd

Remain unheard

And use their poker faces

To sustain their sanity

On their enduring journey to self-gratify their own inhibitions

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

The so-called Human Condition at its finest...another nice piece^^

[Pax]

wow, a profound job...mysteries of humans emotions...

[Krista Weiss]

Wow really great job!! :)

[Redrascalstrawberry]

I like the portrayal of emotions that you have expressed in this poem. Keep writing:)