Gratefulness At Its Best (Senryu)

Enjoy what you have

The sun rises and sunsets

Now on your behalf.

Author's Note

Just a inspirational senryu I wanted to put together. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Indeed, we can never ignore the blessings we have. Each sunrise is a gift to us. So lovely, Brian. Lydi**

[SyberRose]

Lovely Brian...and so true...Rose:)

[Corset]

beautifully expressed, (Imho you do not need the "as" and makes line two eight count "rises" doesn't look it, but it is two beat, I love the idea that the sun would rise and drop at my whim, the year would be spasmodic depending on the mood I was in :P

Enjoy what you have
The sun rises and sunsets
Now on your behalf.

[Ees]

Nice.
I agree. Enjoy what you have while you have it. It always changes.