Loneliest

A time when everything was dark, and lonely.

David, my good old friend he used to say to me 

The darkest days are over, and over they shall be 

But my darkest paths, I used to tread, they fall-in at my feet 

I walk along with tired legs and losing what I keep 

I lost my family, my soul and my whole speech 

I'm last in everything I do and lost with what I seek 

The powers that I'm granted, they are useless, they are weak 

They are never as perfect as what I thought that they would be 

I used to tell myself that I was useless, forever meek 

Then light ran past my eyes and that night I just couldn't sleep 

I thought about my past and what my dream was s'pposed to be 

It became quite a flash and it just happened suddenly 

The pain that I still have is still a torment I can't break 

The moment that I try to, it just throws me down with weights 

I can't stand up to this fight until I see it fade 

So one day when it comes to me, there's no more hope, I pray 

Author's Note

This was written in 5 minutes, so bear with me!

Reviews

[rnuff]

wow this is very amazing, like this wonderful detail and rhyme.

[B30]

Thank you! :D

[Abhishek Ramchandran]

Amazing poem.... really pictures the worst form of loneliness... :') :') 5 minutes only!!!!!! I salute you SIR!!!!! :) :) :) :)

[C.C. Marx]

well written, great detail!

[B30]

Thank you! I appreciate that especially coming from a fellow writer. :D

[C.C. Marx]

no prob, i enjoyed reading it