ZODIAC LOVer

A HOT STAR RIDE or IS IT?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Zodiac LOVer

 

Filtered,
Granules,
…….Heated;
Provides growth and swelling
Dictates a yearning….
My Beta
…….to
Your Alpha
Secular idioms and jargon
Fail to define by the naked
…….I
What exist
…Co-ejaculation…

Verbiage penetrates
My nucleus
Droplets condense
…….I dispense
Suspense and offer no recompense
For the thrill given-
A comet driven expulsion
…And
I ride its tail
Frail but sturdy

A Bilateral NINE
Elliptical LINE
…Can enter and conquer
And define
What a Prime Modal is…

Extending your mass
…I clasp its twinkling light
As if it gives me more
Life
&
Pleasure feel

The disproportionate measure
...regurgitate A mental
Zodiac of us…
My water flows
...and…
Grows yours
Twin lust
My air bears barometric pressure
Expectorate me inside
…of the universe and
Give quadratic blessings
I implode and explode simultaneously

…To love me is not to contain
But frame and arrange with care
Deliver me …
Exorcise my love
Gazer beware

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

BABy ©2009

 

 

Author's Note

I love the sky, the universe.....I dare to dream...to love to lust to desire....whatever your cerebellum conspires.....

Reviews

[MS. BABy]

Thank you Ta Shandra...how have u been I have been enjoying your work also..

[Tasha]

This was brilliant. Wonderful imagery. Great job.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[EMF]

Brilliant. And yes I did understand the physics. A perfect pace and imagry, which belays the eroticism of the whole poem. A crafted work, unlike anything I've ever read before. But I will again. Absolutley magnificent

[Marie Harrison]

Quickly this is going into my basket of favorites!
Love the lifeforce of this unique gem of poetry.

[Ruth]

This is blooming fantastic! lol I so admire your work a lot love...you take all passion and the heart and surround it with universal meaning and longing...the two work so well here!
A favourite again and top marks...blimey! I really cannot say how good this is! lol Superb! xx

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. You made your words come alive and the poem a pleasure to read. I like the photos. Giving the poem a real vision to base your words on. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Rikkevi Rue]

inner-twine like a vine that coils around the shaft of eros-craft
to bring forth south to north riding the summit born of plummit
clever caress under dress serves us metaphors pie out of sky
exploding in galactic climactic eclipsing erotic with rhetoric euphoric!

shhiiiiit gi'l, you awright baby!

[MS. BABy]

blakjassy...thank u very much the universe is to me like a love starved man and woman continuing to need one another to create more...thank u for your encouraging words

[blakjassy]

This is a very free flowing piece and the rhyming scheme used intermittently adds a lyrical or hypnotic kind of tone to it