Bitter Sweet

Bitter Sweet

A Poem by Babbette Francis
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Song lyrics

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In the night I feel your heartbeat
Hold you tight to hear you breathe
Till day light I’m in your arms love
Morning comes with no sign of me.

Tonight I’ll get what I came for
 sweet hellos, and memories
We’ll fall in love all over again
Before the tears of being free

And always I’ll remember you
Not once will you leave my mind
I may walk forward to a new world
But I’ll never leave you behind

You’ve always been there for me
True love of a different kind
But in the land of promises broken
It’s in you I feel my pride
 
And always I’ll remember you
Not once will you leave my mind
I may walk forward to a new world
But I’ll never leave you behind

 

© 2009 Babbette Francis


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The relationship dances away from me on this. Is there a specific relationship in mind?

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very nice...I see your talent as a writer knows no limits. Loved the verses, and the chorus. This one had me constructing my own melody as I read along.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

girl, do I know the feeling. But your poem is both tender and touching. And very nicely written. You have beautiful words, lady.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful lyrics although so sad...bittersweet indeed.

And always I'll remember you
Not once will you leave my mind
I may walk forward to a new world
But I'll never leave you behind

I love this stanza, it tells so much. Great piece Babbette.

Antony

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Lovely. I hear a soft piano playing slowly with this. Kind of an ol' crooner song. Kudos.

Posted 14 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Oh babas very impressive... holding someone close in your heart though not in yours, it is bittersweet sometimes that is love... your words are delightfully melancholy.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 3 people found this review constructive.

That was so nice..how I loved it..
Tonight I ll get what I came for,hellos and memories..we fall in love again and again
I ll always remember you,not one you leave my mind,I may walk for a new life
But you will always be on my mind..
lovely write..

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Babbette Francis
Babbette Francis

Merryville, LA



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Its been years since I've written anything on this site but I entered a story in a contest and would like to see what becomes of it. I guess we'll see how that turns out. You can say I'm new again an.. more..

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