Little Advice

When hungry, eat your rice

When tired, close your eyes

Yall fools may laugh at me

But wise men understand what I mean

Flying little birds in the sky

Dropped stuff in my eye

I'm a big girl, so I won't cry

Just thanking the Lord, cows don't fly

Oouff.. Leave and be gone

You'r breath O.D strong

Hold up, walk back

You'll need a tic-tac

Don't work? ..Use the whole damn pack

I'm not trying to be mean

But here's some Listerine

Don't just take a sip

Or just a swallow

But the whole damn bottle.

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

This just gives me a laugh... the way you convey the words... the whole story is true in detail... again like your other one I read... you invoke the same theme... no holding back type of write... letting the words out...

[Sleepless]

lmao this is hilarious i like your sense of humor ! and everything rhymes i love it keep writing y=cause you r good at it !:P

[BLACK PRINCE]

I like your sense of humour
laced with wisdom.

[Keith]

You crack me up!
The opening is very Zen like. And yes wise men would get it.
Flying cows would give new meaning to s--- hitting the fan.
And that is some serious bad breath!!!
I enjoyed it :)

[Virtuosa X]

Very...original. lol. keep it up girl. Nice poem