You've Been Fooled

I promised that my love for you will never die

But that wasn't until I met another guy

Say.. I had a dog, I'd walk him out

Say.. you were a flower

I'd let him sniff you then lift his leg

and give you a long shower.

Always told you that my love for you is like a rose

Forgot to mention that it's one that's dead and never grows

I tried to tell you what you mean to me

But if I do, I'd get bleeped on live t.v

Every time I see your face in my dream

I always wake up screaming

Always thought I couldn't love no other

Until yesterday, after I met your brother

People say beauty is in the inside

But, some may doubt

However, if it is true

I wouldn't prefer you inside out.

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

This is all, but different from the title... the imagery you provoke in the lines... is quite poignant... this really is an in your face... no love lost type of read... the reader can hear you loud and clear... the voice comes out in this verse...

[BLACK PRINCE]

This is a straight-to-the-point poem.
It has attitude
with a sense of humour.
Yet there is a lot of truth in it.

[Sleepless]

lol once agin hilarious straight to the point i love it and i 've been there i know how you feel except the brother part :P

[Virtuosa X]

Nicely done girl. Yes, let him know. I feel you. Good work

[Keith]

LOL Ouch, for whomever this was written about.
You did very well in stating the author's (or your) feelings about the guys place in life.
All in all well done!