Lust or trust

A short story about a woman name Susan...it's border line adult but good values

 

Susan is a

voluptuous woman

for when you see her,

your senses will tingle

and transpire into

a world of lust, if even

just for a moment.

Her tantalizing figure

 of 36, 24, 36

has me tripping over

my third leg

and I do desire her

yes I do.

 

But unfortunately

she not so bright,

for she allows men

to abuse her

fine work of art

leaving her in the mist

of the night.

She lies there in her room

as darkness surrounds her,

tears flow like waterfalls

until the sunrise.

 

The next day

she starts again

listening to the lies

that men tell her,  

just to sample her fruit.

 

Her addiction to the lust

that surrounds her warm lips

gives a sensation of pulses

through her body

waves upon wave…

exploding in seconds

again leaving her empty

alone,

 in the darkness of her room.

 

It’s now my turn,

as my halo whirls around

on the tip of my horns,

I must contemplate

the choices before me

as Susan is about to witness

a new man, different man

a man who just might

change her direction…

Then again

it could be more of the same.

Wonder what I will do?

 

 

 

Reviews

[Winter McPherson]

Well, the title just drew me in. This is good. I liked it a lot. It's lusty yet sensitive all at the same time. Gives the dilemma of wanting to be totally selfish yet responsible all at once. Excellent.
In light of this write I think you'll like one of mine called "The Object". I'll send it your way...if you don't mind. :)

[closed account]

I agree with Kim!!!! this was a great write, I love how you contimplate
what crown you would wear, the horns or the halo!! hmmm
descisions descisions!!!

[just is]

I say go after her! What a write you have penned here. I guess she brings out the devil in you as well.