Hang Doll, Feathers on the Floor

quick night write

Hurt more than a severed limb
lucid daydream
absense of warmth in the whispers against me
tongues like snakes in a waking night
a family army
hostile wishes of change
wishes of death
death to the only love that saves my life
like I said
wishes of change
death of the self in their daughter.

I could wish
many things
to prove a point
I could wish
many deaths
I could clip my wings
to save their souls
I could kill my self
if it meant I'd never have to live with her again
because I'm not sure I like her either.

Hanging dolls I once loved
to kill time
and evanescent love.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You are a amazing writer. The poem is strong. Took the reader into deep thoughts and actions. I had to read a few times. Title caught my attention. No weakness in the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

An excellent write...
much enjoyed :)