La Honda, Zacatecas

La Honda, Zacatecas

A Poem by Poe Redd

pretty much describing my time in Mexico


Dusted to perfection on a corona-littered earth

Hide me from nothing, this is the reason for my birth

Waiting to break any heart dropped into my hands

But i can't have a familiar poised with gross unfair commands

I shall remain strange to these stranger deranged folk

A mystery here, black stillness, silent wolf awoke

But nothing stops to tease me from my my dangerous revery

Hearing voices calling, far away, just slaying me

Never me they're calling, though they wanted to be kissed

Heads turn to me with stares and, by reflex, i turn and hiss

Could have been kissed last night but they smelled the air was beer

Could have been paid last night but my family was near

Yes, I'm hot, but the night was cold

And I'm still young, or so I'm told

© 2011 Poe Redd

Author's Note

Poe Redd
i'm not vain. :)

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WOW!! That is the perfect description!:) love the wording

Posted 13 Years Ago

love it more every time i read it lol :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

cute :] not at all...

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on February 22, 2011
Last Updated on February 22, 2011
Tags: Mexico


Poe Redd
Poe Redd

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