Wall of Lies

Wall of Lies

A Poem by Balance
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A song about lies.

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Resentment’s overwhelming me,

Its eating me inside,

Comes out so easly from my mouth,

False excuses and more lies.

And as the day progresses,

There is no turning back,

Another fake tear is shed,

I'm well prepared with alibis.

 

“I swear to tell the truth”,

Said the man on the chair,

Kissed his life goodbye as

Burned scent filled the air

When they pulled the switch... down

 

 

Chorus:

All my life,

Ive been giving wrong answers

Bending the truth

Whatever gets me through the night

All my lies

Are served Wrapped up in gold

Piles up brick after brick

Creating a wall of lies



"You are my only one"

Her husband whispered softly to her,

Kissed her lips goodbye,

Went into the arms of another.

© 2012 Balance


Author's Note

Balance
Im aware to a few grammer problems so if you have better offers in order to keep it so it sounds good, ill be glad :)

**not finished** **not finished** **not finished**

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awesome piece! thank you for sharing:P love the chorus

Posted 7 Years Ago


The last verse is relatable except it's the other way around. My mom was the cheater. Anyway good song nonetheless. I like anything with lies since I can so ealily relate :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Sky
I like the flow, the words melt gently into another. Lyrical in a sense. Great piece, can't wait to see it finished.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow, this is a great piece I just wish I had the rhythm that you desired when you wrote it so I could say it correctly. Good work keep it up

Posted 8 Years Ago


beautiful....

Posted 8 Years Ago


Whatever to get you through the night...
Good line. Used a lot in real life.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love the ending! To my knowledge, that's as deceiving as any ending could get, and I love it! And the image described was also well done, I enjoyed this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Pax
the first paragraph is a bit awkward for me, there is something lacking on it..all in all your should continue this..its very good so far.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so beautiful... It has such wonderful melancholy grace that underlies your carefully constructed stanzas... It makes me want to read more. This is amazing. Such a great piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I loved it ♪♫


Posted 8 Years Ago


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Balance
Balance

Kibbutz Nir Oz, Israel



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My name is Yoel Salimsom. I'm 23 years old, i live in a little town in Israel. I'm ex- military, served in a Combat Engineer. i play guitar for 8 years and im a singer in a band. for more informatio, .. more..

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