Love And Reverie

This is for someone special.......

The heavenly stars lean down to kiss you
And I live alone and miss you
Cascade me a heavy dose of your flair
Cause I just wish you were here.

I'll watch the sky turn dark from blue
But it's not the same without you
The stars couldn't light the sky alone
and my life is dull,with you not being in my throne.

The silence isn't so bad
Till I look at the moon and feel sad
Cause the moon that belongs to me
Is hiding behind that black sea.

I'll have to find peace in new ways
Though my nights are longer than days
This is a world of dreams and reverie
Where I feel the stars explode around me

But drenched in velvet moonlight
I'll sit on the shore all night
Lost deep in dreams,of our very own
I ll think of you and I won't feel so alone.

As many times as I blink
you push me to the brink
cause then your smiling face appears
clearing all the temporal fears.

You make me smile because once you said
you would love me till you will bleed red
and for you,I am the best
I would clearly feel blessed if the sun rose up from the west.

When my black eyes get brighter
And heavy heart grows lighter
I'll taste the sky and feel alive again
And I'll forget the world that gave me pain.

But I swear I won't forget you
and i wish if my voice could reach your soul too
I'd whisper in your heart
I will love you forever and its just a start.

Author's Note

Please suggest an apt. title...

Reviews

[Rob Santana]

Graceful with true emotions and passion. Well written.

[Manpreet]

Beautifully expressed emotions! Great word use altogether nice write!

[G!o]

..wait is this from Vanilla Twilight by Owl City? Totally i am in love with this from the first line that i felt the song whisper in this. I have always wanted to write something like this but i take a bow, you have beaten me to it...good writing.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Well...actually i heard this song once...may be a few months ago nd forget who d singer was...nd what was the name of the song...on the day i wrote this poem...something like this was echoing in my mind...nd i was not able to recall that what exactly it was...a song or a poem...so i penned it down...nd now that you told me about it...i googled it nd downloaded the same.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Well...actually i heard this song once...may be a few months ago nd forget who d singer was...nd what was the name of the song...on the day i wrote this poem...something like this was echoing in my mind...nd i was not able to recall that what exactly it was...a song or a poem...so i penned it down...nd now that you told me about it...i googled it nd downloaded the same.

[G!o]

I am glad i mentioned it the...a beautiful song that is

[MOON]

beautifully penned tribute, forever as a start great line.

[Pencrafter]

This is a very heartfelt poem, which should garner some nice points for a special someone.

[The Refined Poet]

The last lines are perfection. I enjoyed the read.

[Dr. Wood ?]

based on the last line I would call it 'The long beginning.'..A poem of true love

[Marie]

I like "Night revery" since it's so much about the night...stars, moon, being wrapped in dreams...

[quinfinn]

how about "deep in dreams"? it would be better if you named it yourself, after all it is your creation....a very sweet and heartfelt prose.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Beautiful sentimental write for someone so special. Nicely penned.