Let my heart confine my muse to my poetry

2012...not quite over!

I have been misled by my earthly emotions!
My words have been directed on your grace
and all I have done is,to praise your beauty.

My heart now sinks everyday
every moment,my own words cause me distress
I am left sipping my own tears
As I search for the remedy,that is to forget you,
my distressed mistress.

In the distant time, I shall recognize you differently
For what I called you,
I was not allowed to call you!
I felt for you
what I shouldn't have felt
and I should have known
that you're just a princess of your own mind
and am not a prince something,but a bard.

The same old hopelessness lurks,
The haunted sense,
The fear that you would find me counterfeit
Not believing in my little sacrifices
my little deeds for the one and only love.

I know it would be tough
to swallow the unfulfilled dreams
All the castles that I built in dark
they will be robbed from me
All our bridges have to be burned down.

The solitudinal purities of my heart,
now shall remove love's crown,
and must learn to live,the way it lived,
not so long ago
and let confine my muse to my poetry.

Reviews

[Deron Alexis]

very relatable very real many people feel like this but yours is the only poem other than the one I wrote to capture this type of situation if i'm right its a relationship that never happened but ruined a friendship

[Felicity's Eve]

Easy to relate to, the flow is great, and I can feel so much emotion throughout this.

Splendid, indeed! :)

100/100

[gombeggar]

'not QUITE over' i think u mean...and u missed a few spaces after commas...well worded though and a nice flow in the whole of it

[Tex]

and let confine my muse to my poetry.... what a wonderful line you have penned there. It says so much in so few words... well done my friend.

[DIVYA]

Sometimes we have to draw those lines in the sand so straight and solid! But what of my heart that's like a child loving it's moon? I have a muse too. I therefore complement you on this absolutelyly touching piece on the feeling. Theres nothing I could have done to put it better!

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

Ah this sounds like what I am going through, nice job!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

It sounded a bit vague to me...but It was getting so much into my mind that I had to pen it down!