A Life Of Confined Blessings

Did you read my verses?

those words that speak of my heart

the emotion that has a name.

 

Did you perceive the little poems 

that i wrote once as rhymes

They stand unfathomable in the sun

You would need my heart to deduce them.

Where is the pain that you saw in my eyes?

I have put them in your bridewell of thoughts

I only yearn for holy bells and divine fragrance

rest is my licence of finiteness.

Did you see the pup who kissed my face?

as I crossed the dreadful street

The one who was endeared,

 more valued than anything?

 

Did you see the child whom I gave a penny

The joy in her smile, pastoral to my eyes

I would not exchange it for anything

That split the world inside my heart.

Did you saw me dancing in the rain

a gradual movement

in the presence of imprisoned sun

For a little life, for a little love, was it?

 

We hoped as much as the Moon's own light

We declared accerbic wars against the skies

But when will those stars start to sparkle

There is a limit of joy that comes from dreams.

Author's Note

Title suggestions pls

Reviews

[Simbake777]

Wonderfully sweet and romantic! Keep up the good work! :)

[Constance Payne]

"Did you read my verses?
those words that speak of my heart
the emotion that has a name."

I did not think I use to care if others read, yet I find that I do and the comments are as much a blessing as anything.

So many blessings within these words, wonderful

[InsanityWriter]

Amazing. Simply amazing. :) I love it.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

the amazing image is compelling because it shows a man sitting alone with the moon, pondering life, whereas there is a sincere appreciatiion of the longevity of an intimate relationship in your writing, such a good poem, well done

[Inda]

Did You See Me? (Title)

This is the question i feel you ask here rather beautifully. Great piece!

[patricia]

I loved the questioning format of this poem which is penned in some star word choices. This flows like a river...it has a great feel to it. Emotive. Deep. Effective.

[Blue Ivory]

I have been thinking of writing something like this myself. I love it, and can relate to it. Sometimes it bothers us to think nobody probably knows what we're writing about, but just love that it sounds beautiful.

[Dayran]

It comes when you mean what you say.

[quinfinn]

smatterings of ink which trickle down into blessings...each one a noble and thoughtful gift of life,very well penned and profound. nicely done!

[gombeggar]

drop the periods...good writing, well done...'We decared a accerbic wars against skies'...should be 'We declared an accerbic war aganst skies'...no blessings are confined, so take that as your title