A Numinous Ligature

From dustless skies to our earthly oblivion
I have an semblance of her image
the omni-present fragrance
that breeds in the husks of my deficiency.

A rainbow in the cloudless sky
the eternal flame of solar credits,
of motionless definitivity
Her memory is my passion.

From my pale mornings to golden nights,
from the aches of acidic moments
to eternal sighs and gasps of extrication
She rules the dynasty of my metaphors.

These is no finiteness to her divinity
for what I lie awake in moon days
There is no depth that I can preach
in her Ornateness of tender lights.

We yearn for the enduring spring of our youth
In a life gleaming with nature's temptations
for as much as we can love,as much as we can live
finding endless joys in this pious bond.

Reviews

[G!o]

Passionately filled with stupendous imagery. Nice flow and amazingly written.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanks man :)

[Blue Ivory]

The 3rd and 4th lines are just wonderful :)
You really are a passionate writer. I love reading your work as I've mentioned before. Keep it up!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

well ofcourse m passionate...i love being called passionate :D thank you

[Blue Ivory]

I've read more of your work. It's always a pleasure :) You are really good at poetry! And my compliments are always genuine.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thanks again :) m totally humbled

[Alexa Tasch]

What complex imagery and depth! A truly wonderful poem!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thanks Alexa :)

[Alexa Tasch]

You're welcome!

[Ruth]

This is a journey of poignancy...
Intelligently delivered, lingers xox

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thank you mam :)

[gombeggar]

this has an enduring feel to it

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thank you sir :)

[Faffy]

i think i feel down the bottomless pit that is your writing, the depth of meaning that you bring out is absolutely astonishing

well done dear poet!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thanks man :)

[quinfinn]

you definitely have no problem using the $13.00 words , my friend. it is a skillful and finessed approach to poetry which you constantly deliver.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

haha,,,thank you so much :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

you have a wonderful command of the language of poetry my friend

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanks doc
:)

[Robert James Parfett]

The creativity and control of language are quite amazing. Not sure I understand it all, but that's not your fault! Great!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thank you sir

[SHEEMA HUQ]

there is so much depth in this writing, simply amazing

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanks :)