Humanity I Love You

I would rate this as one of my best works...

Humanity I love you

Not for smartness and prejudice

but for for your innocence and selfishness

Not how We evade our soul via success.

 

Humanity I adore you

for still breeding the jewles and soils

where love weighs over money

truth over the shadows of hypocrisy.

Humanity I like you

for teaching how life can be free and beautiful. 

Not for the greed that poisones men's souls, 

and the barricades of hate.

Humanity I am enchanted for you

Of how you bring art into our wretched lives

and not for knowledge that makes us cynical;

our cleverness, hard and unkind. 

Humanity I love you

For wheezing those ethics of living,

where living is by each other's happiness, 

and not by each other's misery. 

With songs containing the words

of mankind, of spirituality

Human I love you

But not for your lust-flushed pride.

 

Human I love you for all that you stand

Not the delirious wars you create

But for brotherhood and equality

Its how you shine, with your luscious colors 

 

Humanity I will fight for you

as a young spirit, not as a old soul

with antiquated ideals and morals,so divine.

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I can see you working for the UN at some point of your life.

[InsanityWriter]

Beautiful. :) This piece is a work of art. (:

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed, I imagine it loves you back in equal measure, a very well written piece.

[sakshi arora]

wonderful :) :)..................................................................

[Felicity's Eve]

Usually, I hate humanity with a passion. Sometimes, I'm indecisive. But this amazing piece has kindled by rarely-voiced thoughts of how creative and loving and enchanting humanity can be. :)

I suppose it's impossible to truly see the good in something without ever seeing the bad...

100/100

[Westminster Abbey]

I love this. Humanity differs from person to person, but you have captured both sides of the spectrum. Instead of saying that you hate the human race because of its greed and lust, you look into the soul of humanity and find that at its center, there is a child-like love. Excellent poem.

~Abbey
:)

[gombeggar]

good approval of humanity and it's completeness...needs a re-write though