Trickle

That which makes my soul bleed trickles upon thy paper.

Words like teardrops full of love and pieces of hate... a work of art a promise of fate.

Let the sea of emotion flow let it flood. Make me drown in your blood.

This art of mine is not real to everyone it does not appeal.

But, when a vein is pierced by pen, the blood tells stories of a heartless end.

And so my journey...  and struggle my life does it deal. My blood soaked words my love they are real.

Reviews

[Luna]

I just drowned in your blood and emotion (LOL) that was great . Sure some people will understand our creations and some won't but they have got other opinions. Just because we have somethings in common does not mean we have no differences. But to use the pen to unleash your emotions and in the end when you feel satisfied that's all you need I guess, at least to me that is. Nice read Barbara keep it coming :)

[Barbara Borel]

Thank you very much

[Relic]

This is almost lyrical its so good. The pen can tell many a tale and those tales are told by the character and life experiences of the writer.

I enjoyed this.

[Barbara Borel]

I truly appreciate it . I was just left a comment on facebook that I was Morose and that it was a bad thing. Judgments like that are hurtful to people that can only express through words. I feel almost like we are a support system of writers here

[apageofmany]

Deep poem had to read it a few times lol really good :)

[Barbara Borel]

Thank you very much

[Gee]

Morose, glad I read great again I thought it said MOOSE..could imagine you emerging from the trees, pen in hoof, paper wedged in your antlers. It is a fine poem expressing your feelings, if that is their idea of morose so be it. I say carry on with your morose pen Barbara, carry on

[Barbara Borel]

Thank you, and I shall! Lol