Relative Concept

Relative Concept

A Poem by Beatrice Mars

Love is a relative concept,
Like when you say you're
OK to someone you
Hate.
 
But HOTdamn!
I don't give a flying
F**k about this
Apeshit.
 
So please leave,
If you would,
Because you're taking up
Valuble time and space
And it's been
Decidely unpleasant being
In "love" with
You.
 
Oh Shag,
I didn't Just say that!
 
*Yup you did*
....
*Oh well, he sucked anyway*
Yeah...
...NO!
Let's stop this!
*Yes Let's*
I wasn't - Let's stop this
Please, I never
Really "hated"
You.
Ok.......But
But what?
*He thinks you're crazy!*
(whispers)
Shut Up
But you need
To know how I feel
How-
      Now don't
Go all dramatic,
I'd just prefere
if you were catanonic.
Seriously,
 I can walk through
History,
With my head held high,
Trying not to sigh,
But when I look you in the eye
You're so auditory
I can hear you from a million
Years away.
*Are you going to let him
Talk to you
Like This*
Sorr-
*Don't say sorry*
You're like an atom bomb
I-
You use me!
Like Henry 8th
Used Jane?
How did you know?
You're the same,
There to do
What I want
You to.
You're a B***h.
*Told you he hates you*
Well I hate you
Too
I never said I
Hated You,
I just-
Just what?
I Just -
I love you.
(Sniggers)
*He doesn't love you,
He hates you*
Really? (her voice was sarcastic
Although she was unsure
Who she was asking.)
I'll go, If
I'm taking up
Valuble time and space.
(He quoted dejectedly.)
 
 
As she watched him slink away the voice inside her
asked "Are you OK?"
"Yes," she sighed an turned away from her spurned love,
"Love's a relative concept anyway."
 
 
 

 

© 2009 Beatrice Mars


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Agree with Bea's Peas..It's amazing!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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*adds to favourites* i love this bethan, more than the other one, it's just fabulous, it's like... i don't quite know how to describe what i think of it, it's just amazing:
But when I look you in the eye
You're so auditory
I can hear you from a million
Miles away.

wow.

xxxx

p.s. one thing, but this is probably my own stupidity, what does catanonic mean? (line: if you were catanonic)

Posted 13 Years Ago


HAAAAAAA. LOVE THIS. muchos.

As she watched him slink away the voice inside her
asked "Are you OK?"
"Yes," she sighed an turned away from her spurned love,
"Love's a relative concept anyway."

brilliant.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Beatrice Mars
Beatrice Mars

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