Repetition Rocks. (And I can spell it now!)

Repetition Rocks. (And I can spell it now!)

A Poem by Beatrice Mars

Forward.
 
This is just crazy rambling
And It's stressing me out.
(Because I do stress, just not infront of you.)
I've got to say,  It was simpler
Before,
But now it's just a
Crazy mess, So I'm -
Oi, Get on with it!
Hey! This is the
Forward!
Well, you're taking to long!
I just wanted to
Explain.
Well Don't
Get on with it!
Ok! Well I was going to tell
You how
The wind swept
Through the tree's like
An angry-
Get on with it!
Ok OK, here goes....
 
The Real Thing.
 
Repetition Rocks! -
Ohmygod - That's alliteration -
This is amazing!
You better start writing
This down...(TONE OF FOREBODING)
It's just a conversation!
 
 
Eww
Ewww
Ewwww!
Ohmygod! Repetition!
 
(Brackets) WOW. WOW
(Or maybe that's sarcastic...)
I'm not in this
Very much
I'm not in this
Very much
She's not in this
Very much.
MORE repition!
You spelt it wrong.
Stupid.
 
I failed my life!!!
....
.....
Yep, you did!
Oh dear
LOVE IS HELL.
(It is)
Oh dear,
What can the matter be?
How to drive a
Deserving teacher
Crazy.
Let's do it,
Let's do it!
(REPETITION)
Hmmmm
Hmmmmm
Hmmmmmm
                                   (Hallucinating?)
Oh dear
I'm a
Goofy
Child!!
(Hey, Wait a minute,
I didn't say that!)
Well.....
OoH ErrR!
(Rocky bottom...)
Dignified social
Intercourse eh?
...What ever...
WEAR RUBBER!
NOOOOO!
OH MY GOD
WE'RE ALL GOING TO DIE.
Oh dear, Oh dear Oh dear....
 
Acknowledgements.
 
....I beg your pardon....
 
MERRY CHRISTMAS         MERRY CHRISTMAS                           MERRY CHRISTMAS!
 
(repetition!)
 
 
 

 

© 2009 Beatrice Mars


Author's Note

Beatrice Mars
......Crazy mess! Contributed to heavily By Cassidy Mask and Bea's Peas!

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This is acually amazing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love this like Luca loves mr A.

Dignified social intercourse

Posted 13 Years Ago


Haha I love this poem, it's so perfectly chaotic. It makes me like I'm a mess when I'm reading it and really puts me in the place of the speaker. Also, I love how you managed to be so erratic and messy without swearing at all. It makes it seem kind of family friendly until you look at the content. Excellent work, thanks for sharing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think I just entered into an artistic coma.

Posted 13 Years Ago


lmao....This is great! More plz More!......More Plz More...wooops i did already say that!, ooh well who gives a flying f**k and yes i did read the other one! :-)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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hehehe this doesn't half make me smile :D when i find out how to put poems in favourites, this is going too :P i love it to bits :D

ooh errr (rocky bottom) ahhhh the joys of english :')

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Beatrice Mars
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I'm an 19 year old girl. Of all the souls that stand create I have elected one. When sense from spirit files away, And subterfuge is done; When that which is and that which was Apart, intr.. more..

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