Mend My Soul

~*~*~*~
Intrusting you
Spirit in soul
You see me through
Laughter like gold
Grab me up
Brace me for the fall
Words like magic
Enchant us all
~*~
Horrible deeds
You can’t replace
Endless suffering
Have taken loves place
Finding no other
As perfect as you
Devine intervention
Certainly due
~*~
Fairytale forests
In my dreams love to taunt
Leaving me guarded
Holding on the spot
Frozen with fear
Not sure what to do
Hopelessly falling
Into you
~*~
Mend my soul
You have once shattered
Stitch with love
The pieces matter
Hold me closer
Than any human being
Spending nights
Alone with me
~*~
Typical longing
Human desire
Giving it up
Faith doesn’t matter
Trust me once
I left you for dead
Trust me again
I’ll help you hold up your head
~*~
Mistakes replaced
Memories overtake
Not certain my place
Keeping my heart
Close to your own
Stitch me up, baby
We are calling this home
~*~
Teenage tyrant
Adulthood dread
You’ve done something
I will leave unsaid
We are growing up stronger
It takes all of me
Loving you is easy
Trusting can be free
~*~
Once shattered
Always alone
You came in
Saved my soul
Protect me from danger
Even your own
Love me, darling
Fear has left me cold
~*~
Mend my soul
You have once shattered
Stitch with love
The pieces matter
Hold me closer
Than any human being
Spending nights
Alone with me

Author's Note

"Maybe. You're gonna be the one who saves me, after all, You're my wonderwall"-Oasis

Reviews

[The Cute 1]

i like this

[Sweet Emotions]

I like the quote at the beginning. This poem is really exceptional writing. It's so emotional, I love it.

[RedInk524]

I love it, it describes some personal issues in my life and so i took each line to heart. Good poem.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Mistakes replaced
Memories overtake
Not certain my place
Keeping my heart
Close to your own
Stitch me up, baby
We are calling this home

I particularly like that verse but the whole poem is quite deep and creative.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Ali, this is beautiful..............Once shattered always alone you came in
saved my soul

[∂αʌ<..]

Mend my soul
You have once shattered
Stitch with love
The pieces matter
Hold me closer
Than any human being
Spending nights
Alone with me

i lOVe this bit most...it hit home just on the first read!

[☯]

An amazing and magical, romantic poem. The theme of trust and love in it flowed well and held with power. I especially liked the opening statement: "It may have been in bit and pieces, but I gave you the best of me." And this statement clearly explains everything and every feeling that you gave off. It's an amazing poem and I enjoyed reading it. Lovely :)

[Skateprincess]

I like that song by Oasis :) This was a great heart wrenching poem that was full of depth

[Revolutionary]

I love the trust me once trust me twice and stitch me with love the pieces matter.Well crafted poem with nice flow.I love the confess your feeling poetry.