I wish...

I wish...

A Poem by BeccaBelieved-
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At first it was a quote I wrote but i changed it into a poem-like form. Hope you like it!

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I wish....
Life
Was simple,
Love
Was easy,
And he
Would
Realize
Just how
Much I
Love
Him.

© 2011 BeccaBelieved-


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I agree with Joey.

I wish love
was easy
I wish life
was simple
I wish they
would realize
I wish you
would see
how very much
you mean to me.
:D
lol...

uhh...ya. xD totally basically copied ur whole poem and just redid it my way.... *smacks self* that's really bad for a reviewer to do......sorry X) i just wrote one cause it's so inspiring!

this was a great poem! seriously! even with how short it is, many things can be said in just a few short words! great job :)
~gabbz

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

I agree with Joey.

I wish love
was easy
I wish life
was simple
I wish they
would realize
I wish you
would see
how very much
you mean to me.
:D
lol...

uhh...ya. xD totally basically copied ur whole poem and just redid it my way.... *smacks self* that's really bad for a reviewer to do......sorry X) i just wrote one cause it's so inspiring!

this was a great poem! seriously! even with how short it is, many things can be said in just a few short words! great job :)
~gabbz

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Boy, isnt it the truth. :/

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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BeccaBelieved-
BeccaBelieved-

Raymond, NE



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