Kneeling on the edge of midnight

Kneeling on the edge of midnight

A Poem by Rik B
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Based on picture by Nina Lipkin

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The vision is quite clear with the moon so bright,
Its beauty everlasting, its power filled with light.
I watch over those that sleep through the night,
As I kneel on the edge of midnight.
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The lands are vast, but I have the gift,
I see through the moons glimmering rift.
I am the savior of the night, a shimmering light
I am a winged fairy, and evil I shall fight.

Kneeling on the edge of Midnight, waiting.
Kneeling on the edge of Midnight, debating.
I protect those that dream in the night,
I catch those that fall from the light.

I have always been, and I will always be,
And all that I do, you will never see.
Just know that I am there to make things right
Kneeling on the edge of your midnight.

REB (FEB2012) based on picture by Nina Lipkin

© 2012 Rik B


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Beautiful job the poem fits the picture beautifully. Imagery is vivid and rhyme scheme adds a nice effect, my only complaint is the repetition of I. You did an amazing job. keep writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cased in relative meaning and tambre, well done, good read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great! Again,the begining is awesome.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Rik B
Rik B

Portland, OR



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