Words Hanging

Words Hanging

A Poem by Bella-Marie
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Only I can understand this :) But it may be good poetry.

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I have nothing left to say
I think I already said it
In words that were not spoken
But were left hanging, unfinished

Yet you understood
You realized, and you complied
I'll change one day
But not today

Maybe tomorrow

If I'm given the chance

© 2010 Bella-Marie


Author's Note

Bella-Marie
I want to know if it was a good length, and because I have nothing left to say I hope that it was sufficent.

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I think it is very poetic and beautiful. My interpretation (sp?) of it is a fight occured and silence on one side was interpreted precisley as wanted. It's enough to make one understand but leave them hanging just enough to wonder what it truley is the author speaks of. I love it. Thanks for sharing

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sounds like a relatioship cut short. If that's the case, I like the mirroring of the poem cutting short as well

Posted 13 Years Ago


thats sorta sad....... hmmmm.... trying to think of a better word....... sweet..... hmmmm.... touching.... ARGH I NEED A THESAURUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

never mind.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on October 2, 2010
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Bella-Marie
Bella-Marie

Hamilton, Waikato, New Zealand



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