The Lost Heart

"Sometimes things get lost along the way"

My heart lies in a place

I can no longer be.

I’m sailing a ship

On a dry empty sea.

My spirit is now barren

Where the heart filled my chest.

Days are spent drowning

On a fool hearted quest.

Why can’t I feel the passion

Or excitement of devotion?

My soul remains detached

And devoid of emotion!  

There are feelings inside,

They are so hard to trust.

This physical yearning

For unspeakable lust.

So, I’ll take a chance

On this unforeseen course.

Seemly moved by

This veiled boundless force.

Will time soon replace,

My leather bound heart?

A leap of faith, now ready

For this unthinkable start.

Reviews

[emipoemi]

wow! Brava! Very soothing, very pleasant, very strong in message and imagery! Nicely woven. I only have one note, and one note only:

"Why am I left waiting
Devoid of emotion"

Like that, the lines not only have better musicality, they therefore emit a stronger power.

Well done overall! Much enjoyed this!

[A. Kim Spradling]

Once again you challenge me! I like this immensely! I strive to do better. I changed the stanza. Thank you again for your constructive feedback! I love it!!

[emipoemi]

you're very welcome. It all a pleasure on my end.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Somehow, the lost heart will find the way
I believe that somehow, love will.take you there...

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I love how you made your poetry piece. Nice lines and rhymes. The subject was my common subject before so I can relate.

[A. Kim Spradling]

I sincerely hope this heart finds its way! Thank you for your kind comments.

[Matthew Kult]

Its when we aren't looking for it that it seems to present itself. Lust, sex, exploration, justify it as you will, but the future is new, the present is what you make of it and the past is simply a reminder of who we are.

Always and with love,

Jayden D.

[A. Kim Spradling]

Thank you for your comments. You are correct about how love presents itself when we are not looking. BUT, the heart has to be in the right place to receive the love given... Thanks again for your insight!