In Darkness Sleeps

In Darkness Sleeps

A Poem by Belthizor
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A poem I wrote reflecting my conflicting feelings towards a girl who returns the feelings, but wishes to stay faithful to her boyfriend. A work in progress, but we all gotta start somewhere

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In darkness sleeps a troubled mind
In silence breeds my fears
In loneliness my bane doth stir
To drag you away from this heart of mine

It steals away my precious gem
It leaves behind an empty shell
It shatters my hope, my desires
This pain will never mend

I cast my wish into the fire
As I fight this last battle
'Tis you I desire for the rest of my life
Will you grant my last desire?

© 2010 Belthizor


Author's Note

Belthizor
Bear in mind, this is still a work in progress



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Very well written.
CFB

Posted 13 Years Ago
Awesome! sorry I have to keep reading this! its awesome

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Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is great!

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 Added on June 5, 2010
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Belthizor
Belthizor

Melbourne, Australia



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