Literal Love Story

Literal Love Story

A Poem by Deepika

Pen to the paper:

You are one among the very few that I trust,

So I don’t hesitate, but everything I entrust,

My joys when I’m excited,

Woes  when I’m dejected,

Blots when I’m confused,

Scrathes when I’m frustrated

You are smashed at my mistake,

At times blown as a rocket,

Or sold in the market,

While I stay cozy in the pocket!

You are pure white with no mark,

And I leave you polluted and dark

I silently lust for your company,

When typewriter creates a better harmony!

Paper to the pen:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

My dear, I crave for you of which you ‘ve no clue!

I’m cherished only when you emit a vibrant cue,

I’m striked when you seem low,

I gain my value based on your flow,

At times you are replaced by the typewriter,

But his words make no sense without your signature!

Apart from you pencil talks to me without any bound,

But I preserve your words as they are profound

You and me make a great pair,

Let’s make the life fair!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2015 Deepika


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What an affair.......
pen and paper........cute pair.....
love is like that.........you destroy each other completely.........and love it!!!
LOVE IS CRAZY.period.
you have a great imagination......and gifted pen.......
another awesome poem........
i loved it!!!
:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Deepika

5 Years Ago

Aww..thanks a lot Pushkar for your beautiful comment! :)
Pushkar Prabhat

5 Years Ago

you are most welcome...........!!! :) :)


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Very clever and impressive piece...rather brilliant actually.

Thanks for the share

Posted 4 Years Ago


Pretty impressed with the way you see things. You have great eyes for things coupled with your great brewing of words. Awesome!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Deepika

5 Years Ago

Thank you dear friend! :)
this is the best one yet for me..deepika you are very observant finding such a cute topic and story isn't everyone's cup of tea i loved it..it made me blush and smile all the same time thanks for sharing deepika keep wriitng i look forward for more

Posted 5 Years Ago


Deepika

5 Years Ago

Thank you ayank for the lovely compliment! Glad you liked it :)
Wow this is soooooooooo awesome. It's completely original and massively creative. I would never think to write something like this. But this relationship is truly on of the best. Its one that has survived since its beginning. And its keeps on going strong amongst many difficulties such as typewriters, computers and so many of manmade technologies. Great job once again. Stay inspired.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Deepika

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much Kristan for you lovely insight! That means a lot to me :))
Your world of creative writing takes your readers to different part of the world, that is form of magic and your spell:) simply amazing


Posted 5 Years Ago


Deepika

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear friend for stopping by and for the kind review :)
A. Amos

5 Years Ago

You're most welcome and all the best
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This is written very well! I enjoyed it so much.

- Brittney

Posted 5 Years Ago


Deepika

5 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Brittney :)
613

5 Years Ago

You're welcome!
I love the way you are able to instill life through your perspective in things which often receive our nonchalant attention. I guess you are best when you do that.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Deepika

5 Years Ago

Means a lot! Thanks Avinash :)
cute one.
I’m striked when you seem low,
I gain my value based on your flow (best lines)
lovely affair and lovely poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Deepika

5 Years Ago

Thank you much Prashant :)
kha se laate ho yeh ideas...Miss Creativity... aur kucch baccha hai abhi....itna kaise socch lete ho :)
matlab koi bhi cheez dekho aur ussko link karke itni badia poem likh do....now I will try the same too... wont be able to write this brilliant but.... :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Deepika

5 Years Ago

haha..try on the same topics in your style ;)
Anurag

5 Years Ago

I have written it... check it out :)
Ayank Chourasia

5 Years Ago

that nickname suits here she is brilliant
you are the owner of great imagination . i liked it very much

Posted 5 Years Ago


Deepika

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much Harpreet for your valuable time :)
Harpreet kaur bajwara

5 Years Ago

your welcome g

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bangalore, karnataka, India



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