wonderful poem takes me to my younger years when I was trying to find what love means what love has me
and then to find that love last forever but feelings can expire at any given moment with a year drop that
stays on until I fall asleeo
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
Thank you Robert for visiting and a lovely review of my poem
Warmly, B
A wonderful story so far dear Betty. Had the feel of a Nevil Shute tale. I liked the set-up and the need in the tale to find the soldier. Hello from Michigan and thank you for sharing part of the story.
Coyote
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
Hi John in Michigan… thank you so much for a lovely review, much appreciated
Warmly
.. read moreHi John in Michigan… thank you so much for a lovely review, much appreciated
Warmly
B
You have an excellent knack for short stories and how to affect the reader; your lady goes through physical pain and great anticipation to see her soldier. I hope she soldiers on.
I'll add my best wishes for the results of your surgery
My wife went through it abt a yr ago and I don't think I am too far away.
You have done another typically well written piece but I have trouble being too sympathetic with your unfaithful lady.
How long is this poor soldier sod going to be in medical difficulty.
Be it too long, your loose lady may be attracted into yet another sexual fling, however it will take a mind more devious than mine to lead her even further astray!!
Keep up the nasty BESTB.
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
Okay I will…thanks Davie for a intuitive review
Warmly, B
the saga continues. nice flow of thoughts in her head and life. she seem to know what she wants but often goes with the tide. she's really got it going on.
"the joys the sorrows, the tears, and the laughs, all commingle together now
I have achieved my aim so far, although my future is uncertain"
god be with you in your surgery and prayers for a speedy recovery.
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
Thank you Pete for the lovely review as always and the first eye is doing very well, appreciate your.. read moreThank you Pete for the lovely review as always and the first eye is doing very well, appreciate your good wishes!
Warmly, B
All's more than well in your world of words, Betty - that's for sure. :) Hopefully the same applies as quickly as possible with your eye surgery. Thinking of you, as always, dear friend.
Thank you dearest Em for your comment and good wishes….day 2 and I am seeing much better, thank yo.. read moreThank you dearest Em for your comment and good wishes….day 2 and I am seeing much better, thank you, much appreciated my friend🌹
Warmly, B
1 Month Ago
Will pop in every so often, Betty. Go slowly, dear friend, please.
This is quite the tale spin in this poem. Voyage on a ship with nerves all electric and on edge. A soldier that is confined in a hospital. All while watching a beautiful sunrise out the porthole of a ship.
Thank you for taking me on this amazing journey with your words and images painted
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
Thank you PB, what a lovely review…I can only see out of one eye, but I can still read,
Mu.. read moreThank you PB, what a lovely review…I can only see out of one eye, but I can still read,
Much appreciated!
Warmly,
B
1 Month Ago
I do hope your eye heals quickly
1 Month Ago
Day 2 and feeling ,seeing well., thanks for your concern 🌹
Warmly, B
My love of poetry results from my love of art. As a painter I am able to express myself on a canvas. As a poet my words come from my heart, my moods, sometimes sad, mostly upbeat. I like to use vivid .. more..