Amen

Not a religious work. This poem is a dedication to my dear friend, who lost her father recently. :(

Bodies decay,
Souls elude.
Struck away,
With no prelude.

Blood drips,
Rusty blades.
Merry trips,
In the everglades.

Cloudy shrines,
Thoughtful passes.
Memory mines,
Deadly gases.

Cute babies,
Mutated bodies.
Spanning rabies,
Sprawling rowdies.

Beautiful women,
Attitude dry.
God save them,Amen;
Stop them cry.

You.
Him.
Her.
Us.
Them.


Rusty blades.
Deadly gases.
Mutated bodies.
Sprawling rowdies.
Attitude dry.

God save us all.
Amen.

Me.

Reviews

[Riddhi]

A very nice poem....You have carved the main idea of this poem in a very beautiful manner in this poem...
I liked the way you used words and all the more the poem had rhyming words which appealed to me the most...I should say that you are indeed a very talented writer who uses powerful words to express his ideas and to put forward his ideas before his readers and you have the talent to keep engaged your reader in your poem...
Eager to read your next writing...
Keep on writing and thanks for sharing.....
Riddhi

[Bhaarath Ramesh]

Thanks a metric tonne. ;)