Ice Cream

I made this a long time ago and just found it! This is how I wrote it with all the "OH OH's". I'm not sure I like it too much anymore, but I am posting it just because!

An Ice cream? Maybe too much, not enough for anyone else.  Too skinny, too weak, too big for my taste. Too big, too skinny, is all they said. Not good enough, oh oh, Not good enough oh oh. Not enough for mama nor papa, not enough for sister nor brotha, not enough, they said I'm not good enough. But I am good enough oh oh , I am good enough oh oh. They told be not to get up as they pushed me to the ground, but I am good enough oh oh and you are good enough oh ohhh. 

Reviews

[Lisasview]

I believe you meant to say I wrote this...not I made this...right...
Anyway sounds like a song..because of the oh oh
and because the lines are not broken up
you could work on it and restructure it to become a poem...
For example
Ice Cream, too much...not enough
To...and so on...just a thought..
Lisa