Eggs

I made this for fun , just read it, and please give me critics I just love eggs

Eggs
The eggs sizzling in the pan
The ways to use
The ways began

It could be raw
Like an open wound
It could make you sick
or even thick

THick will be your veins
The cholosterol rising
Which is a shame

Laying, awaiting
Is a hearth attack
But I still love this greatly made egg!

Reviews

[halflives]

Wow, haha! I laughed the whole time!

[BrynnaW.]

What a great description of eggs! Hahaha I, personally, do not like the taste of eggs but you described them very well! Good job and keep on writing!