Drifting.

the stars at night do nothing but gaze...
one sleeps in solitude
the mind wrapped in wonder
the body in grace.

Reviews

[Elizabeth]

Short and sweet. You put a lot of meaning in very few words, which is always an endearing quality in a writer. Short poetry is the most difficult to write because it can be easily too simple or incomplete. But this paints a great mental image. Great write :)

[ReversingEvolution4TheB..]

I'm not going to give you Good or Bad here.

There is NOT enough content in this poem for my taste. HOWEVER, you were saved by the content you HAVE.

This is one of the simplest pieces of beauty ever to be put in writing. I give you a full 100/100 for this one, and I thank you for posting it.

Write On!