I Don't Feel...

Ever read that Dr. Seuss book?

"I am not going to get up today"

Well that's how I...

No more like ..

I don't feel like feeling,

Not about you anyways

I don't feel 

Like loving you

It seems a waste of time

I don't feel

Like hating you

Then my love would be a lie

I don't feel

Like laughing

I'm afraid of going insane

I don't feel

Like crying

For then it'll flood again

I don't feel

Like being used

Tossed from side to side

I don't feel

Like trying to

When I should just hide

I 

  Don't

        Feel...

Author's Note

Not my best, but it was on my mind..., just had to get it off my chest...

Reviews

[Jeremia]

I think many people can relate, and in there relating they can understand why you would say this isn't your best. It is very difficult to write when one feels like this. It's as if we lock away our feelings inside of a box made of dirty glass. So we cant really see what it is we are feeling, we know it is there, but cant fully describe it. We do this to prevent the pain, but in reality it just prolongs the pain. I know the feelings all to well.

[Serenity Faith]

I'd say you definitely understand my feelings...the box made of dirty glass represented my thoughts quite well. Thank you for reading. It means a lot ^_^

[Jeremia]

Haha, of course. :) I wrote a poem kinda similar, was trying to write about the box and being unable to express what I felt because of it.

[Writergurl]

I don't feel
Like being used
Tossed from side to side

I don't feel
Like trying to
When I should just hide

I feel this way from time to time, you wrire really good and express yourself well

[B-poet]

It seems like not feeling like it should be a warning sign for anyone who tries bringing up insignificant B*llSh*T in a conversation just to get a rise out of someone. Your poem is very unique and expressive in its own way. Great job. :)

[Pax]

i have felt your weary heart... very tired of all the hurts around you... i can only say your doing good in penning your thoughts and emotions... keep it up my friend... Great!

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

"I don't feel
Like being used
Tossed from side to side

I don't feel
Like trying to
When I should just hide

I
Don't
Feel..."

I can definitely relate. And it's alright if it isn't your absolute best(: the point of writing isn't to be the best, but to express yourself and your feelings.. It's a good way of getting unwanted emotions to go away, or at least with me it is. This is a beautiful poem, great write (:

[Serenity Faith]

Thank you...it was rather hard to explain these feelings of mine, but as you said it got them off my chest for the time being ^_^

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Yeah, I know what you mean. I hate when I don't know how to describe my feelings, but then I write anyways, and it confuses people.. But your jumble of feelings turned out well in the form of a poem (:

[Lost in Wonderland]

"I don't feel
Like crying
For then it'll flood again

I don't feel
Like being used
Tossed from side to side

I don't feel
Like trying to
When I should just hide" I can totally relate. Sorry you're feeling (or not feeling) like this. Nice poem, well expressed emotions or rather lack thereof