Ruin Me

Ruin Me

A Poem by Serenity Faith
"

One day girl, there'll be a guy who ruins your lipstick, not your mascara.

"
Please take this broken heart of mine
Down from it's dusty shelf
And with it take all the cries
The callings out for help

Im sorry that I'm no good
I do not deal well with hurt
Its simply just I've come to terms
That love is a foreign word

Dont be so ridiculous
As to underestimate my ache
This me with a happy smile
Is surely soon to fade

He smiles ever so nicely
A blush upon my cheek
Girl I will ruin you
Be wary in your dreams

Im scared now of sleeping
But it seems I've met defeat
As I close my eyes so slowly
Drifting into the deep

And there you are boy
Waiting there for me
Just like I knew you would
Prepared for the ruining

Im called over and pulled close
Makeup running down my face
Ah now thats no good
Here now, as I ruin this

And his lips touch mine
And he tangles my hair
And he tells me of love
And he ruins my fear

Yes, he ruins me
Taking away my guard
So I can love again, 
Ruins me, by fixing my heart.

© 2013 Serenity Faith


Author's Note

Serenity Faith
The inspiration for this one came from the quote in the description. I came across it on facebook, and it made me ever so hopeful and ever so inspired. So tell me what you think ^_^ and above all, enjoy!

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Yes, he ruins me
Taking away my guard
So I can love again,
Ruins me, by fixing my heart.

love your closing stanza, amazing poem here

Posted 1 Year Ago


Very nice set-up of words and thoughts.
"Yes, he ruins me
Taking away my guard
So I can love again,
Ruins me, by fixing my heart."
I like the ending. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved the pleasant surprise at the end! What a lovely poem :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I enjoyed this read...

well done, keep it up :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Took a different turn then I expected it to. That's good, I like to be kept guessing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes, he ruins me
Taking away my guard
So I can love again,
Ruins me, by fixing my heart.


This is an astonishing piece of art, I have had to read it a few times to absorb. It takes you one a different journey each time, fabulous!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vivid imagery here, you told a story of love effectively. A nice read :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Pax
lovely dear friend... a healing start to an endearing end... i enjoyed this piece, great work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Smiled and smiled more... to see such a beautiful glimpse of love... it truly can bring summer to the soul... May it be, dear poet... may any pain you've suffered truly be washed away so you can love and be loved always and ever.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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