Baby Girls

A poem I wrote before I had my daughter ^_~

Baby girls heartbeats sound like butterfly wings

They push and move and make us wonder things

Will she have my smile and her daddy's eyes?

Will she learn to laugh, until she cries?

Once she is here, that's when we'll know

As we watch everyday, our baby girl grow.

Reviews

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

Very nice and well-written, it is a joy to read. The lighthearted style and simplicity of the poem is where its beauty lies. Chosen words describing a baby girl's heartbeat, smile, eyes, and laughter add a pretty view of the subject in the reader's mind. Lovely!

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Sweet and tender wonderings of an expectant mother.

[zainul]

Amazing fetal experience expressed in poetic talent.
Great poem.