Romeo and Juliett

 

             Romeo and Juliett

 

Remember not the pathos of out plight, Or the tears

of our too youngful end. Mourn us not, for we became

a light, Eden shining still through deathless night on all

who first pure love would comprehend judge us not,

Although we chose to die. Undone by beauty such as

few have know love so perfect one could reply,

In words less meteoric than it's own. Each life must

wend it's way towards death and pain, Though we

died young, Our story shall remain....

Reviews

[JMaster1]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o7GJgncybV8

[Marie]

Shakespeare would be proud.


I saw a few errors but didn't pick them out.

[MaggieMortis]

Thank you so much, I have been trying to write more but have come up with a block. Need some inspiration