HAIKU

This is a haiku I made up

A deserted street
No signs of life visible
Nothing but silence

Author's Note

Give me feedback on what you liked or did not like about this haiku

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

BlackRose23,
HAIKU
i see this is your last poem listed. Are you going to submit more? I hope so.
What is it about sheer silence? We either are comforted or want to escape?
"No signs of life" We desire life. You covered the important points well.
Blessings,
Kathy

[Diamond]

I remember the movie Silent Hill upon reading this Haiku. It paints a picture. Nice one.

[BlackRose23]

Thank you!!

[Misterr Remeat]

I like it a lot
It makes life look different
thanks for sharing it

[BlackRose23]

Thank you for your feedback. I am glad you liked it

[Najam Us Saher]

I wonder how people can write meaningful and thoughtful haikus. I liked this.

[BlackRose23]

Najam Us Saher Thank you so much. I am so glad you liked it

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺