Do you remember...?

Do you remember...?

A Poem by Kurai.Merodi
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First love and the ending

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Do you remember my face that day?
Do you remember my  texts?
Do you remember the reason why? 
Do you even remember?
I do.
I remember every thing that day.
Start to finish.
I remember the way you walked up to me, 
the same laziness but there was something in your eyes.
I remember how you spoke,
soft but no sound of love.
I remember how I lied,
saying I was fine,
trying to keep it in.
I remember how you walked away,
not turning back.
And how my tears burnt.
Did you know I still read our texts.
Still think about our first date?
Laughing Playing...
Did you know I still get butterflies when I think about our first kiss?
Did you know I still cry sometimes?
I suppose you're fine though.
I suppose you don't remember.
I suppose it wasn't really that special to you.
Other wise...
you would of looked back.

© 2015 Kurai.Merodi


Author's Note

Kurai.Merodi
This is about my first love and how it ended

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That's a question that is constantly asked in my mind. It's great to remember those moments. While the reality is there, I like to believe that somewhere down in their heart, some fragments of you exist. They wouldn't have bothered in the first place.

Posted 10 Years Ago


There's always that question, "Do you remember..."

Last line is a killer; ties it together with a relatable, heart crushing reality.

Great piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on February 19, 2015
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Tags: Love, Broken

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Kurai.Merodi
Kurai.Merodi

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Love is simpy frabricated. But that doesn't stop us from belieaving in it. 私は地獄でお会いしましょう I would rather go.. more..

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