I Have a Feeling

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I Have a Feeling.

I Have a Feeling, That i Can Be more UpBeat And Happier Than Right Now

That I Can Change My Feelings in a Blink of a EyeBrow.

 

Putting Pen to Paper Might Take Ages.

So I Still Put Pen to Paper,

Sinking My Miseries into a couple more Pages.

 

I Have a Feeling,

That More Innocent Blood is Going To be Spilt This Afternoon.

Peace is more Important Than Reaching the Moon.

I Have a Feeling,

That I'm Going To Be a Dad Soon,

Seeds Are Precious,

So I need to Stop Acting Like a Goon.

 

I Have a Feeling,

That Something Good is Going to Embrace me In The Near Future.

Stand Up Tall,

Instead of Crawling Like a Creature!

 

I Have a Feeling,

That I'm Blessed.

A Feeling So good,

When i Feel it It,it Makes Me Feel im Cut Above The Rest!

I Have a Feeling,

That I'm Cursed.

A Feeling So Bad,

When I Feel it, I Really need To Take Some Time Out Because it Hurts!

 

I Have No More Feelings!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

very well executed and carefully drafted, excellent rythmic vibes too...

[MIB]

Brilliant mate, I enjoyed this there is a lot of emotions going about... keep up the awesome work ;)

[The Random Writings Of ..]

Coming from someone who's emotions are all over the place, I can relate to this piece. Going through emotions all over the place can be exhausting, and at the end I love how you write " I have no more feelings"! Sometimes that's just how you feel at the end of an emotionally exhausting roller coaster ride. You show every tipping point, frustration, excitement, anxiety, fulfillment, and everything in between. It's a cluster of a piece as it should be.

[BLACK PRINCE]

This is a deep, emotional, inspirational and sad.
I guess it also shows frustration.

WELL DONE

[SHEEMA HUQ]

exhaustive! a convincing depiction of how eratic emotions can be prior to a major event like becoming a father, touching. thanks.

[Fabio_Cassilias]

Thanks Bro :D

[nigrum homonculus]

this was brilliant. especially:

"That I'm Going To Be a Dad Soon,
Seeds Are Precious,
So I need to Stop Acting Like a Goon."

that line spoke so much volumes. keep it up with the honesty bro