Before, Now, Who Knows

Before you

I was looking and searching

For something

But I didn't know what 

All I knew was that 

I needed to feel 

Something

Now with you

I can't even explain

The way I feel

I found what i needed

You

Who knows 

What will happen tomorrow

We must live day by day

But not forget 

For one second

the way we really

Feel

Reviews

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Amazing write, really enjoyed this

[Maria M.]

This poem has movement to it, like the ebb and flow of the ocean tide and it is quite beautiful. The way you use a singular word at the end of each stanza , "something...you...feel" is wonderful and really highlights the main idea in the poem! Great work!

[Dove]

This is a lovely piece of writing, good job