Before, Now, Who Knows

Before, Now, Who Knows

A Poem by Blaines Baby

Before you
I was looking and searching
For something
But I didn't know what 
All I knew was that 
I needed to feel 
Something

Now with you
I can't even explain
The way I feel
I found what i needed
You

Who knows 
What will happen tomorrow
We must live day by day
But not forget 
For one second
the way we really
Feel

© 2011 Blaines Baby


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Amazing write, really enjoyed this

Posted 12 Years Ago


This poem has movement to it, like the ebb and flow of the ocean tide and it is quite beautiful. The way you use a singular word at the end of each stanza , "something...you...feel" is wonderful and really highlights the main idea in the poem! Great work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a lovely piece of writing, good job

Posted 12 Years Ago



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