By The Way

By The Way

A Poem by Blake Blackstone
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Lyrics to my song called "By The Way" listen to the song while you read the lyrics here at www.myspace.com/drowningLyourLmother

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You don't listen, why do I try?
You don't listen, f**k off and die
appropriate everything
can't control a human being

(By the way) x4

You
want
me
dead
you
want
me
gone
I
feel
the
pain
..creeping up on me..

(By the way) x4

You don't listen, why do I try?
You don't listen, f**k off and die
appropriate everything
can't control a human being

(By the way) x4

You
want
me
dead
you
want
me
gone
I
feel
the
pain
..creeping up on me..

(By the way) x4

You don't listen, why do I try?
You don't listen, f**k off and die
appropriate everything
can't control a human being

(By the way) x4

© 2010 Blake Blackstone


Author's Note

Blake Blackstone
Lyrics to my song called "By The Way" listen to the song while you read the lyrics here at www.myspace.com/drowningLyourLmother

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wow so powerful...thanks for sharing

Posted 8 Years Ago


Thank you Jed. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Jed
awesome song/lryics

Posted 8 Years Ago


The songs good mate, though I will admit I'm not the best of judges. Some Eluveitie and Kamelot are the closest to the metal scene I get. The songs entrancing, and you did some good work on the video. However, you sound like your editing the sound on the actual verses, which seems to be making them a bit scratchy. If that's the effect your going for I'd keep it, but try it plain. The chorus works great the way it is though. Good work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


This sounds like lyrics to a song more than I poem. The feeling and meaning are loud and clear. You just need to add a verse. Great write

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow big brother...lol it was funny to me actually. Well not the death part....just the bridge...anyways...thanks for sharing....

Posted 9 Years Ago


tis pretty cool reminds me of sometihng i wrote about an old ex girlfirend of mine i tried to be friends with i wrote a cool poem about it too

Posted 9 Years Ago


really wicked

Posted 9 Years Ago


Woah, thats scary but good. Yeah, I think that sums it up, not at all what I was expecting tbh, nice work.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Blake Blackstone
Blake Blackstone

Miami, FL



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My name is Blake Blackstone, I make music and I also am a filmmaker. My (one man) band's name is Drowning Your Mother. www.myspace.com/drowningLyourLmother I also have a have a website that I made m.. more..

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