By The Way

By The Way

A Poem by Blake Blackstone
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Lyrics to my song called "By The Way" listen to the song while you read the lyrics here at www.myspace.com/drowningLyourLmother

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You don't listen, why do I try?
You don't listen, f**k off and die
appropriate everything
can't control a human being

(By the way) x4

You
want
me
dead
you
want
me
gone
I
feel
the
pain
..creeping up on me..

(By the way) x4

You don't listen, why do I try?
You don't listen, f**k off and die
appropriate everything
can't control a human being

(By the way) x4

You
want
me
dead
you
want
me
gone
I
feel
the
pain
..creeping up on me..

(By the way) x4

You don't listen, why do I try?
You don't listen, f**k off and die
appropriate everything
can't control a human being

(By the way) x4

© 2010 Blake Blackstone


Author's Note

Blake Blackstone
Lyrics to my song called "By The Way" listen to the song while you read the lyrics here at www.myspace.com/drowningLyourLmother

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wow so powerful...thanks for sharing

Posted 9 Years Ago


Thank you Jed. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Jed
awesome song/lryics

Posted 9 Years Ago


The songs good mate, though I will admit I'm not the best of judges. Some Eluveitie and Kamelot are the closest to the metal scene I get. The songs entrancing, and you did some good work on the video. However, you sound like your editing the sound on the actual verses, which seems to be making them a bit scratchy. If that's the effect your going for I'd keep it, but try it plain. The chorus works great the way it is though. Good work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This sounds like lyrics to a song more than I poem. The feeling and meaning are loud and clear. You just need to add a verse. Great write

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow big brother...lol it was funny to me actually. Well not the death part....just the bridge...anyways...thanks for sharing....

Posted 10 Years Ago


tis pretty cool reminds me of sometihng i wrote about an old ex girlfirend of mine i tried to be friends with i wrote a cool poem about it too

Posted 10 Years Ago


really wicked

Posted 10 Years Ago


Woah, thats scary but good. Yeah, I think that sums it up, not at all what I was expecting tbh, nice work.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Blake Blackstone
Blake Blackstone

Miami, FL



About
My name is Blake Blackstone, I make music and I also am a filmmaker. My (one man) band's name is Drowning Your Mother. www.myspace.com/drowningLyourLmother I also have a have a website that I made m.. more..

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