Solitude
A Poem by
Blake Fodor
With patience, I ask for your emergence Here by my side, where I am implied While marching moments, mutely torments An eternity, in severity Has bestowed a union, of a companion- No, not with your magnitude, but with solitude I keep on talking, and unlocking All my precious emotions, vast as oceans And only on my friend hereby, do I rely I keep on waiting, endurance initiating But the pain, I cannot refrain, It takes the breath, and touch in-depth This heavy toll, wrenches my soul But I must, keep the trust On my wait, for times ahead Or should I, untie- This loop of pause, and eventually cross- This border, of disorder! At least this end, I have a friend To share my presence, my innocence! You have returned my youth, my new friend - solitude…solitude…
© 2014 Blake Fodor
Reviews
This is one interesting write and I truly enjoyed, Thank you for sharing
Posted 9 Years Ago
Simply beautiful and so eloquently penned. I love the sheer elegance of your write
Posted 9 Years Ago
Simply beautiful and so eloquently penned. I love the sheer elegance of your write
This amazing piece of poetry has a natural soulful feel
Posted 9 Years Ago
This amazing piece of poetry has a natural soulful feel
The power of these words move me deeply
Posted 9 Years Ago
The power of these words move me deeply
Beautifully detailed. Good work
Posted 9 Years Ago
Beautifully detailed. Good work
I love how your passion spills forth.. Your style truly beats like a heart..
Posted 9 Years Ago
I love how your passion spills forth.. Your style truly beats like a heart..
Loved the rhyme of this one, a lot of them were very clever and it was an unusual setup. Solitude can be a plague or a privilege depending on your perspective, and you make that clear in this.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Loved the rhyme of this one, a lot of them were very clever and it was an unusual setup. Solitude can be a plague or a privilege depending on your perspective, and you make that clear in this.
A really nice write. You have a quiet way of expressing yourself, that leaves lots of room for thought.
Posted 9 Years Ago
A really nice write. You have a quiet way of expressing yourself, that leaves lots of room for thought.
Wonderful wordplay and content, there is a silent strength to these words that ignites a fire, well done.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Wonderful wordplay and content, there is a silent strength to these words that ignites a fire, well done.
What a great write. Really enjoyed this, how you've come full circle with memories of youthful times.
Bring alone allows us the time to lay things to rest but I think ultimately it would drive us mad.
Posted 9 Years Ago
What a great write. Really enjoyed this, how you've come full circle with memories of youthful times.
Bring alone allows us the time to lay things to rest but I think ultimately it would drive us mad.
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