White liquid pearls
A Poem by
Blake Fodor
White liquid pearls, falling from an oyster heaven, coat of luminescence, sparkling majesty. As if, hidden in a flame of white lightning, blinding the eyes of winter's artistry, etched cathedrals hidden in glass, hosting the last supper to spring's birth.
© 2014 Blake Fodor
Reviews
Three words to describe this: Very amazingly awesome!
Posted 9 Years Ago
Really wonderful imagery. Very well done.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Really wonderful imagery. Very well done.
This is very nice!! ..........
Posted 9 Years Ago
This is very nice!! ..........
This is very nice and says a lot with few words. Keep writing my friend!
Posted 9 Years Ago
This is very nice and says a lot with few words. Keep writing my friend!
Aptly titled and illustrated to touch the reader with what is beyond reason and within emotional reach.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Aptly titled and illustrated to touch the reader with what is beyond reason and within emotional reach.
Full of heartfelt emotion-this has a smooth flow and a relatable theme
Posted 9 Years Ago
Full of heartfelt emotion-this has a smooth flow and a relatable theme
It is well written and deeply felt writing. It is emotional, personal and it flows well.
Posted 9 Years Ago
It is well written and deeply felt writing. It is emotional, personal and it flows well.
Done skillfully and with smooth flow-a winner piece! Enjoyed...
Posted 9 Years Ago
Done skillfully and with smooth flow-a winner piece! Enjoyed...
I love seasonal imagery, especially dealing with the changing of seasons, and you've nailed it here...lots of unique and colourful images in this one...nicely done Blake.
Posted 9 Years Ago
I love seasonal imagery, especially dealing with the changing of seasons, and you've nailed it here...lots of unique and colourful images in this one...nicely done Blake.
Elegantly written. The imagery is beautiful!
Posted 9 Years Ago
Elegantly written. The imagery is beautiful!
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