White liquid pearls
A Poem by
Blake Fodor
White liquid pearls, falling from an oyster heaven, coat of luminescence, sparkling majesty. As if, hidden in a flame of white lightning, blinding the eyes of winter's artistry, etched cathedrals hidden in glass, hosting the last supper to spring's birth.
© 2014 Blake Fodor
Reviews
Nicely chosen words give this a celestial quality of imagery, well expressed.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Cleverly written with a powerful delivery. Very nicely done!
Posted 9 Years Ago
Cleverly written with a powerful delivery. Very nicely done!
this is something special. It exclaims an intensity with its vivid imagery and evokes emotion
Posted 9 Years Ago
this is something special. It exclaims an intensity with its vivid imagery and evokes emotion
This is very original. I find myself really liking how you write-a bit in circles, bit understandable, reconnecting curves!
Posted 9 Years Ago
This is very original. I find myself really liking how you write-a bit in circles, bit understandable, reconnecting curves!
It's a beautiful poem Blake.
I think it can be interpreted in ways other than it's intended.
Or maybe as intended? :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
It's a beautiful poem Blake.
I think it can be interpreted in ways other than it's intended.
Or maybe as intended? :)
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