Walk On By

Walk On By

A Poem by Blake Q Hatfield
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Basically about someone who denies their love. They fear that they are not perfect enough, that what's going on in their life would be too much for them, and that ultimate love wants to screen them from it by pushing them away, eventhough they don't want

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Just walk on by me
Walk on by me baby
Just walk on by
Forget my name and walk on by
 
I knew sometime before our hearts grew old
I knew when we were bold
The world was ours, we were winning it all
The world was ours
What went wrong
 
Just walk on by me
Walk on by me baby
Just walk on by
Forget my name and walk on by
 
Good to see you baby
I cannot lie
But for you own good you must deny
The things you saw in me
And Walk on by
 
I wish I was the person
I use to be inside
But I can't take more heartache
The pain would be too much to hide
Until we get ourselves together
Just walk on by
 
Just walk on by me
Walk on by me baby
Just walk on by
Forget my name and walk on by
 
I see that beauty
I see it in your eyes
The way you smiled at me
Made me feel alive
We could not anticipate
How things would go awry
It didn't make much sense
So please just walk on by
 
Never said I didn't love you
Baby that would be a lie
But something that seemed perfect
Could never be reached
I guess it would be better
If we said our goodbyes
As hard as this may be baby
We must go our separate ways
And just walk on by
 
Just walk on by
Walk on by
When I see you around
I feel warm inside
But this could never be
So please walk on by

© 2008 Blake Q Hatfield


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It was written to a tune I had stuck in my head, I think it was a Madder Rose Song

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is good.
Easy to relate to.
And catchy.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This reads like a song. I wondered if it was written to be lyrics? It is really lovely and sad. Funny, because I would think you wrote it for me because you capture the exact theme of what is going on in my life right now. Maybe you are him disguised as someone else. (i don't really think so) This piece has a really beautiful flow though it has a heartbreaking sentiment. Thanks for sharing with WC.

peace,
danielle

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Blake Q Hatfield
Blake Q Hatfield

Philadelphia, PA



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I began writing back in '94 and I've been in love with it ever since. Music has a big influence on how I write, and what topics I choose to write about. I like to write a clever piece every now and th.. more..

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