Lying never Loves

About a guy who lied to get a date

Why do you hide?
Keeping Secrets,
telling lies.
You can tell the truth,
if you try.

Holding things in,
keeping yourself hidden,
If all you do,
is hold things back,
it can really take a tool,
and throw a friendship off its track

Author's Note

i wrote this when a guy i liked lied about who he was.

Reviews

[Kaitlyn Raiford]

It was a bit short, but that, in no way, is a factor of how much impact it may have on someone. It was beautiful.

[Rebecca Carolyn]

Wow, what an amazing poem! It is on a very good subject and has a strong foundation which people can really relate to.
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[Boris Jonathan Novak]

I've seen this happen to a friend before; so, I know the deception is just unforgivable. You've really put this out there with a raw sincerity. Great work!

[felweed]

Soetimes guys do that because they are so insecure. They want to try to make it seem like they are someone cuz they feel they are to dull and boring otherwise.

Signed,
a guy

[Rev. Fr, S. D. Blankens..]

I love this, Bella. I'm sorry it happened to you. :(


WA YA

[Just Plain Me]

This is a really really good poem :]